Not strictly speaking a story - but the challenge was to show character-in-action. Both are sketches of characters who I'm hoping will appear in future Rurik stories...
Feliks
The crowd parted.
Into their midst strolled Feliks, his left arm
curled possessively around the waist of a Ladylark. As the men fell back he
acknowledged them with a wave of the ebony cane in his other hand, the ruby in
its handle throwing shards of blood red light over their features.
“Are you having a good time, boys?” The
question fell into deep silence. Feliks’ grey eyes narrowed. “It seems not. Rosa - sing!”
The woman at his side planted a kiss on his
cheek before wriggling free of his embrace.
Feliks turned towards the bar. “A bottle of
Bloodboil, and be quick with it.”
The barman almost ran across to the raised
platform, but Feliks still arrived first. The gentleman lowered himself onto
the couch, crossing his legs carefully so as to avoid creasing his linen
trousers. The cane was laid aside as Feliks fetched a thin silver case from his
pocket.
The barman, a sheen of sweat visible across his
bald pate, struck a match.
Feliks opened the case and placed a dark
cigarette between his lips. He leaned forward to touch it to the flame, which
trembled only slightly in his employee’s hands. When a wisp of smoke rose into
the air, Feliks waved the man away.
With a sigh of satisfaction, he loosened the
cravat at his throat, undid the gold buttons of his jacket and draped a
silken-sleeved arm along the back of the couch.
He took a deep pull on the cigarette, rolling
the smoke around his mouth while he surveyed the silent men standing beneath
him. As the first notes sounded on the piano, Feliks blew out a perfect smoke
ring.
The diamond in his tooth flashed as he grinned. “Sing, boys! Sing!”
Amba.
A grimy hand snatched the bread virtually from
under the stallholder’s nose.
“Oy!”
But already the
thief was out of earshot.
Amba scurried
between the long skirts and greatcoats and market barrows, her eyes darting
from side to side in a constant search for uniform. She clutched the loaf to
her chest, drawing into herself what little heat remained in it. Gradually she
slowed her pace.
Only when she
was absolutely certain that no-one was after her did she stop. Amba allowed
herself a triumphant smile. It had been so easy!
She tucked the
loaf into the waistband of her skirt in an attempt to keep it clean and flicked
a black flea from the golden crust. They would have a feast tonight – providing
she could get it home safely. Almost absently she scratched at a couple of
bites on her arm, considering the safest route to take with her treasure.
A pungent smell
wafted under her nose. Amba sniffed the air, trying to pin down the source of
the deliciousness. Her eyes widened. Over there!
The barrowman
speared a fat sausage from his makeshift grill and slapped it between two
slices of thick black bread. The sandwich joined several others, all kept warm
on a metal tray heated by several candles.
Saliva flooded
Amba’s mouth. What a prize that would be, if she could get it.
She moved
steadily towards her target, taking a circuitous route just like Pa had taught
her, all the while scanning faces, making sure that they hadn’t noticed her.
She was almost there. Within touching distance. Wait! Wait…till the barrowman
turns to the grill again…Now!
Great insight into your characters, thanks so much for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita - I just LOVE creating characters!
DeleteGreat writing, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed them, Fiona. Thanks.
DeleteI love seeing characters come to life. So much fun to see you bring them to life in such a way :)
ReplyDeleteThanks very much, Kama. Let's hope that one day, they'll be larger-than-life and in a novel!
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